Thank you so much Aaliya! I’m so surprise that you would venture into psychology thriller. I heard you have a bad day with health so I’ll pray for your recovery.
And I suspect that Elise is going to end up at some point finding out about the lie, though under the circumstances she might not be upset that she was lied to. ⚖️
Your words bring joy to my eyes. This novella is special in someway I can't spoil. Hope you will find it even more entertaining in the chapters to come.
Wow this is intense. Your descriptions of the rain, the lightning, and the atmosphere are so vivid that I could practically feel the chill.
Thank you so much Aaliya! I’m so surprise that you would venture into psychology thriller. I heard you have a bad day with health so I’ll pray for your recovery.
Thank you so much, yes I was feeling under the weather, appreciate your concern bless you
Here you start of right away!
"Only pain makes you remember. Only fear makes you thrive."
Great chapter, mate!
Very tragic and terrifying chapter! 💔
And I suspect that Elise is going to end up at some point finding out about the lie, though under the circumstances she might not be upset that she was lied to. ⚖️
Your words bring joy to my eyes. This novella is special in someway I can't spoil. Hope you will find it even more entertaining in the chapters to come.
Good opening line: “It’s funny that cold metal can leave a burning sensation even when you just reimagine it.”
Thank you 🙏
Hai, when I read this, I feel like I'm right there! You have such a great way of describing places and capturing the atmosphere of the moment 🖤🖤🖤
Thank you, Zuza! I credit the real weather for that <33
Gosh! Such adjective use to paint pictures and feelings....
Thank you! 🙏
"Only pain makes you remember.
Only fear makes you thrive."
That voice stays
long after the person who said it
is gone.
Not because it was kind.
Because it was true enough
to build a survival system on.
The most dangerous education
is the one that works.
Harry did not lie to Elise
because he is dishonest.
He lied because the truth
requires a context
she does not have yet.
And giving someone the truth
without the context
is just a different kind of weapon.
"This woman bleeds for me.
No one has ever bled for me."
That line is the whole chapter.
Everything before it
is the explanation
of why it hits so hard.
I will be here for chapter 5.
— AËLA
Thanks AELA, you are very on brand 👍
Remarkably vivid imagery which hits all the senses. Well done.
Thanks Jule. This chapter is rather short ^^
R