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xtrole's avatar

I like that this chapter shows how even if one person thinks that an act of physical intimacy didn’t mean anything another person involved might not have viewed it that way.

Also, if Elise actually thought that he was out of the gang, I think she may soon realize that he wasn’t being honest with her.

Excellent writing, and I look forward to reading more of the story!

Hai Dang's avatar

Thank you so much, xtrole 🙏 I can’t spoil with Psychology thriller so I’ll have to keep you guessing hehe.

AËLA's avatar

She mistook the transaction

for love

once before.

This time

she mistook the ending

for a negotiation.

Both times

she was reading

a language

he was never speaking.

— AËLA

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Thank you Aela 🖤 🙏